Rivka, I agree with everything you are saying. Marriage is precious and many people do give up too easily. However, you need to be careful about judging individual situations. You really have no idea what is going on. Your essay includes the story of one family. Imagine how that family might feel if they read your essay, how judged they might feel. (perhaps there was abuse or drug addiction, etc.) Many people judged me when I got divorced. They had no idea what was really going on.
2. Anonymous
7/07/2010
Rivka, I agree with everything you are saying. Marriage is precious and many people do give up too easily. However, you need to be careful about judging individual situations. You really have no idea what is going on. Your essay includes the story of one family. Imagine how that family might feel if they read your essay, how judged they might feel. (perhaps there was abuse or drug addiction, etc.) Many people judged me when I got divorced. They had no idea what was really going on.
7/07/2010
be careful in judgements
Rivka, I agree with everything you are saying. Marriage is precious and many people do give up too easily. However, you need to be careful about judging individual situations. You really have no idea what is going on. Your essay includes the story of one family. Imagine how that family might feel if they read your essay, how judged they might feel. (perhaps there was abuse or drug addiction, etc.) Many people judged me when I got divorced. They had no idea what was really going on.
7/07/2010
Rivka, I agree with everything you are saying. Marriage is precious and many people do give up too easily. However, you need to be careful about judging individual situations. You really have no idea what is going on. Your essay includes the story of one family. Imagine how that family might feel if they read your essay, how judged they might feel. (perhaps there was abuse or drug addiction, etc.) Many people judged me when I got divorced. They had no idea what was really going on.